(This is my narrative essay that I wrote for English. It's about Camp Barnabas. :D )
Staff holler, “Welcome
to dinner. Please remember Quiet Doors!” A popular variation of the phrase is,
“Welcome to Quiet Doors! Please remember the dinner.” They shout in vain
attempt to keep the horde quiet. The deck creaks and I hear the soft ba-doom of wheelchairs rolling over deck
planks. 400 people press onto the deck, waiting for the blessed words, “Dinner
is ready!” Sweat trickles down my forehead, and I swipe it away with my thumb
knuckle. Behind me, a camper tells his counselor a joke. In front of me, a
little girl plays with her singing doll. Beside me, my own camper, Mark, clings
to my arm, anxious for the anticipated feast. “Remember,” he slurs, “I
predicted we would have macaroni and hot dogs.”
The
moment of glory comes, the “Bless All Mess Hall” doors are propelled open. Mark
pulls me forward, still holding my arm for balance. His unnatural gait jerks me
down and then forward, down and forward. Feet shuffle, chairs roll, and campers
bound for the doors. The Quiet Doors do their magic and the previously chaotic
mob, settles down the moment it marches through them. Mark drags me inside and whispers,
“Smells like macaroni.” Before I can reply, a wave of scent slaps me in the
face, the over-head fan blasts and the drastic temperature change makes me
shiver. The Mess Hall feels like a different dimension. Mark mutters something,
but I press the tip of my finger against my sweaty, upper lip to remind him to
respect the Quiet Doors.
The
waft from the kitchen penetrates and remaining silent gets harder by the
second. A camper steps forward to bless the food. Everyone around me shifts in
their seats. After a long day of swimming, canoes and archery, stomachs are on
their hands and knees, begging to be feed. My head is bowed, but I hear stomachs
complain. Finally, the awaited words are spoken, “Great job on Quiet Doors!
Let’s eat!”
Steaming
bowls of food are rushed to the table. Mashed potatoes, chicken, rolls and –
Mark was right – macaroni are plopped onto our plates. Manners fall into the
background; between passing plates, laughing, talking, and enjoying the scrumptious
morsels, no one remembers to chew with their mouths closed. The macaroni tastes
incredible. The roll melts in my mouth and butter drips on my chin. Crispy
batter on the chicken crunches. Cold, sweet tea washes it down.
Max sits across from me. He cannot walk or
talk because he has cerebral palsy. I say, “Hey, Max, are you having fun?” Max
giggles in response. Conner, his counselor, laughs at Max’s enthusiasm then
lifts a water-filled straw up to the camper’s lips. Max sucks the water, but a
little dribbles out on his shirt. Conner grabs a napkin and wipes up the water.
Like
an African drum rhythm, a slow beat starts at one end of the room. Boom, clash, boom, clash, clash! Everyone
snatches utensils and bangs them against the table. Counselors and campers join
the “Jungle Rhythm” until every soul in the room is contributing. The noise is deafening, but as quickly
as the noise begins, it stops. Applause explodes in the room.
The
Bless All Mess Hall is the gathering place at Camp Barnabas – a summer camp for
special needs children. It’s a regular camp with “normal” activities, adapted
so that every child, no matter his or her disability, participates. The campers
come from all over the country. Many are teased in school or neglected by their
parents. Here, attention – the good kind – drenches them.
As
I watch campers and counselors, like Max and Conner, I realize that this is
what life is about; loving unconditionally. Counselors are having chug contests
with their campers, kids are building airplanes with their napkins, and
laughter is abundant. The counselors give themselves, unreservedly to their
campers and the campers are forever grateful for that slice of selfless love.
Another
chant is launched, “Blow the whistle!
Blow, blow the whistle.” The cooks succumb to our demands and a shrill
whistle pierces the thick voices. The whistle is the beloved dessert signal. Brownies
are ushered to the table.
As
the campers receive their tasty treats, dramatic moments of chocolate obsession
take place. After Mark takes a bite, he stutters, “Ash-a-ley? You’re awesssome.”
Tears spring into my eyes as another Jungle Rhythm begins. No, I’m not awesome.
We’re awesome; all of us. “Yes,” I conclude
to myself, “we are far more alike than
different.” Thank you, Camp Barnabas.
5 comments:
Ashes this was awesome I love it!!! It makes me wanna go to barnabas soooo bad!!!
AW! YAY! That was the goal. I hope you will go with me someday sissy. The Bless All Mess Hall is a truly fascinating place - the things that happen there...My rough draft was 1,200 words but my assignment length had to be no more than 750. It was sad....LOL!
Your picture is funny...btw...
Ashley! This WAS AWESOME! I just wanted to keep reading it. You did a great job! I love you and I will see you tomorrow! *kiss and hug*
Shiphy
Ashley this is amazing!! You are such a talented writer!
Hi Ashley! Just to let you know that on my blog, Inlets and Harbors, the guest post that you submitted will be published later tonight! Just let me know if there's anything that you want changed about it!
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